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At a beach...
As sonic sat down on the rock he thought why was it so dang hard?
He knew he had hurt her so many so many times but he had thought nothing of it... he knew that wasn't true he did care for her "but she was so obssesive!"
he mumbled "no that's not the reason either" he replied to himself "god dangit sonic! why can't you just tell her" he screamed " but it's to late It was my last friggin' chance"

~~FLASHBACK~~ (oh classic >_>)
Sonic: God Dangit Amy Leave me alone I hate you and everyone In mobious knows it! he yelled
Amy: but... I-
Sonic: I don't give a crapabout what you think! You chase me all day lond could I have some time to my self? DO YOU UNDERSTAND THAT?!? He yelled at the top of his lugs
~~END FLASHBACK~~
Which all brought him up to this point he had seen Amy crie before but not this hard "why?" he sighed as he jumped off the rock he stared at the sea
suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder "whoah!" he yelled and jumped up into the air then he turned around and saw sparkling emerald eyes
"amy" sonic mumbled under his breath
"sonikku" amy said "I'm sorry I-"
"amy what are you sorry about?"sonic asked "It was my fault I didn't mean anything that I said back there I was ignorant I do care about you It's just I din't understand I... I mean please forgive me ames
"oh couse sonikku"
and just then sonic presses his lips against her's and under the moonlight night they share a kiss
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Meanwhile behind a bush looking out on the beach tail and knuckles roll on the ground lauging their heads off

Note-I made this story while listening to were not gonna take it i have no idea how that helped...
Oh and I'm only 13 wow I think i'm a little to young to do a story like this >_> but what the heck anyway this is my first sonamy story what do ya think?
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~tabbyhog Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is story not bad at all you know what say first time good luck(NOT i made it up i think)
ERR IDK awesome story anyway!!!
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Mood: Love ~sonamyfanlover12 May 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome...just plain awesome:)
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~lover333333 Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
for a first it's not really bad... but you could work a little on it. Maybe a little longer?
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~PrincessAmylRose Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
sweet c:
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:iconprodigy91:
no your not alittle too young to write a story like this i'm 13 too an me loves it!
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:iconprodigy91:
no your not alittle too young to write a story like this i'm 13 too an me loves it!
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:iconprodigy91:
no your not alittle too young to write a story like this i'm 13 too an me loves it!
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:iconlolpopcutie21:
hey im 12 and i loved it!!!!! <3 (i dont know why but i thought this was kind of funny i mean when u where adding some side commets) werido i know i am! :D
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:iconfrekklface12:
im 12 and new to deviantart but THAT was lovely i love sonamy stories and whats so wrong with ur moms sein ur stories
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:iconsonamy0090:
I love it !!! I'm a 11 year old I don't really care :) I love sonamy met him since I was 4 :). Biggest fan if my mom catches me reading or doing these stories this might be the last breath I take ^^
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